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____أول قصيدة لي بالإنجليزية _______"تفظلوا...................." __________:)_:)Juste M£! Prefect Love Story Withe My Girl Friend:p But I forget To have THE END:confused: She Change My life from good to bad Day after Day ,...Im Sad I find To be Glad , My Style iS Not bad Ipromise her to live this story for ever But Now the game is over! Why is not for ever? Is not a game is a real love story hmm..I inderstaned you do'nt have personality To say Soory You are late don't apologize Since ,I don't have Time to ignore don't Worry I prefere to prepare My lessons in english unstead withis ecology also Philosophy ,iSlamic and history I'm Busy withe My project of economy All people Find things in This Life Isearche to be happy withe friends and Familly I find a body for my smile to come back:) Ilive Withe my dreams night after night I dream Ifind my self withe you in my dream Withe you or not is the same Like since fiction film but its title has no name By :[AbD£[L]Jal!L]'مسلم":D |
محاولة جميلة ولو ان هناك غلطات املائية وهذه المحاولة اقرب للقصة منها للشعر يعطيك العافيه تحياتي ليان |
جزاكــــــ الله خيـــرا على النقد البناء أسعدني كثيرا ردك المميز فمرحبا بإنتقاداتكم و تدخلاتكم *_* |
So Think You So Much SisTer lol Teacher |
الرائع عبدالجليل الله يعطيك العافية |
الله ينورك شكرا على ردك المميز |أخي عبد العزيز |
Fantastic my dear Muslim Very good poem just there is some dictionary and grammar mistakes good luck Accept my pass |
الرائع مسلم الله يعطيك العافية على جهودك المبذوله تحياااااااااتي |
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